Friday, 8 October 2010

Narrative Script

Here is our Narrative script of our treatment, mended and altered to the final product;


Scene 1 - Bedroom
Face is hidden under hat
§  Shot of basker tapping his guitar, then plays gently on the strings –mid shot
§  Close up of birds/seagulls flying in the sky together
§  Camera pans into a window and zooms into the room
§  Girl in her bed wakes up, yawing
§  Her phone goes off – Text message from Jack ‘See you in 5, Love You xx’
§  Mid shot of the Girl smiling, but realises she’s late by looking at the clock
§  Grabs the duvet and sways it in a clockwise direction

Scene 2 – Bathroom
§  Opens the bathroom door – Shot reverse shot
§  Turns on the light – Close up shot
§  Shot of just her eyes, applying mascara, then her lips applying gloss (close ups)
§  She poses in the mirror – Mid shot
§  Lights go off in time with the song, shuts the door – shot reverse shot
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Scene 3 – Outside
Then immediately cuts to the front door opening
§  The guy is waiting in front of the door – Mid shot
§  Over the shoulder shot of the girl surprised and happy, as she hugs him
§  Both are then in the shot, as he strokes her face/hair
§  Random close ups of her outfit, shoes etc
§  Mid shot – the couple walking off, holding hands
§  Flirting and dancing as the walk down the beach/park
§  Zooms and cuts to other couples in the same scene
§  Crane shot into the sun, cuts instantly to the lights of the carnival floats

Scene 4 – Carnival Night, Club and Arcade
§  As its getting darker the bright lights of the festival are seen everywhere
§  Soundtrack fades – People screaming in excitement ‘Hey guys! Woohoo tonight is the night’
§  Amateur footage of the festival, people and the crowd, pictures taken and shown on the screen
§  Random shots of the Donut and candyfloss stalls
§  Group of friends enter the club, have a few drinks – Mid shot + close ups
§  Dancing on the dance floor – cuts
§  Walking into the Arcades – more lights flashing, laughter and fun

Scene 5 – Ending; Town
§  The same group of friends apart and say their goodbyes to the couple –shot reverse shot
§  The couple then walk back home together – long shot
§  Both walk pass the same basker playing on his guitar joyfully, as seen at the start, smiles
§  Takes pictures with the basker, still frames
§  Basker reveals his face, smiles and winks at the camera –close up
§  Packs his belongings i.e. guitar and walks into the distance –long shot
Fades into dark.




Image of a busker >>>>  

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