Pitching Of Ideas In Class

Our teacher arranged us to do pitch our ideas to the class so far. We had very good feedback ;

What are the strengths of the group's pitch ?

• Detailed research into the theme, similar real media products 
• Intepretation of both ideas 
• Easy to follow blog 
• Timelined well
• Good amount of research 
• Good target audience research 
• Good details about song choice and video ideas 

What else do you think they could do/what are the areas for improvement?

• Good blog design but is it appropriate ? 
• Balance text with images esp Target Audience 
• Finalise treatment - needed o be clearer 
• Use variety of presentations 
• Sketch Storyboard / Album art / Magazine
• Investigate more location

Overall , we got given a level 3!!!